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Diversity Statement Revised
Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:02 pm
by alkaseltzerx
Moved to PS section.
Re: Diversity Statement
Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:07 pm
by shump92
Too long, too descriptive, and too much exposition. I lost my interest a couple of paragraphs in and didn't want to keep going. Start was honestly just odd. A diversity statement doesn't need to be like metafiction and acknowledge itself. Make the story your only focus. Really should only have 1 double spaced page for this. Make the beginning for interesting and everything should be very specific to you.
Re: Diversity Statement
Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:29 pm
by CanadianWolf
Very well written. I couldn't stop reading. You took me into your world.