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I'm a pretty good editor and can really tear something apart if that's what you're looking for.

For mine, mainly looking for ways I can trim the fat to get it under a page (right now, it's over a page by about 5 lines).

trudat15 wrote:I'm a pretty good editor and can really tear something apart if that's what you're looking for.

For mine, mainly looking for ways I can trim the fat to get it under a page (right now, it's over a page by about 5 lines).

I'd love to swap! As an avid reader, I've always been a good editor. I'm probably a better editor than I am writer! I've got a tricky statement, trying to talk about a couple different things without it being too longwinded. It's also really really rough, so please do tear it apart. Should I post it here or would you rather go through PM?

whirledpeas86 wrote:

trudat15 wrote:I'm a pretty good editor and can really tear something apart if that's what you're looking for.

For mine, mainly looking for ways I can trim the fat to get it under a page (right now, it's over a page by about 5 lines).

I'd love to swap! As an avid reader, I've always been a good editor. I'm probably a better editor than I am writer! I've got a tricky statement, trying to talk about a couple different things without it being too longwinded. It's also really really rough, so please do tear it apart. Should I post it here or would you rather go through PM?

Sent you a PM

anyone else?